Monday, February 23, 2015

I am Poems

Post your I am Poems here. Remember to write from the point of view of Cole.

22 comments:

  1. I Am
    I am dying and alone
    I wonder what death feels like
    I hear birds chirping
    I see a white bear
    I want to be in jail
    I am bleeding

    I pretend to be tough
    I feel numbness in my hand
    I touch a nest
    I worry about the birds
    I cry about being alone
    I am going to die

    I understand why I'm here
    I say that it’s their fault
    I dream about a good life
    I try to act strong
    I hope to live
    I am dying and alone

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  2. I Am

    I am powerless. I am forgotten.
    I wonder why I chose this island?
    I hear people laughing at me.
    I see my dad coming to finish me.
    I want to prove them wrong.
    I am powerless. I am forgotten.

    I pretend that I'm okay.
    I feel as if I'm going to die
    I touch the spirit bears fur.
    I worry that I won't come back.
    I cry from the pain.
    I am powerless. I am forgotten.

    I understand Peters pain.
    I say that I'll make it back.
    I dream that I'll show them wrong.
    I try to stay strong.
    I hope I'll make it.
    I am powerless. I am forgotten.

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    1. great poem Catlinn. I think that you have made some excellent points

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  3. I Am

    I am isolated and dying
    I wonder if I will survive
    I hear birds chirping
    I see my life flashing through my eyes
    I want to leave this island
    I am isolated and dying

    I pretend to be okay
    I feel lonely
    I touch my busted open flesh
    I worry I won't survive
    I cry from the horrible pain bearing through me
    I am isolated and dying

    I understand peter's pain
    I say I will get everyone back for doing this to me
    I dream about the spirit bear
    I try to kill the spirit bear
    I hope to leave this island
    I am isolated and dying

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  4. I Am

    I am mad at my parents
    I wonder if im going to die today
    I hear the birds chirping
    I see blood all over
    I want to be in the prison instead
    I am isolated

    I pretend i am the strongest
    I feel pain all over my body
    I touch my vomit
    I worry that i wont survive
    I cry when the ashes get in my eye
    I am going to kill the spirit bear

    I understand that i might die
    I say that i will escape this island
    I dream about getting off this island
    I try to be thhe best
    I hope i get off this isand
    I am hated

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  5. I Am
    I am isolated and defeated.
    I wonder why Peter hadn't kept his mouth shut.
    I hear the ocean waves.
    I see bile and blood.
    I want to survive my dire injuries.
    I am isolated and defeated.

    I pretend that everyone caused my mistakes.
    I feel an agonizing pain.
    I touch my own pool of blood.
    I worry the Spirit Bear will return.
    I cry about my injuries and isolation.
    I am isolated and defeated.

    I understand if someone fears me, then I can trust them.
    I say the Spirit Bear ought to have fled.
    I dream I am being mercilessly beaten.
    I try to vent my anger on anything in my vicinity.
    I hope I will survive.
    I am isolated and defeated.

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  6. I Am

    I am desperate and busted open
    I wonder if my sorrows will go away?
    I hear the blood of my ribs dripping
    I see my life flash before my eyes
    I want my life back
    I am desperate and busted open

    I pretend everything is okay
    I feel forgotten
    I touch my pain silently
    I worry what will happen next
    I cry to myself
    I am desperate and busted open

    I understand what I've done
    I say I am not wrong
    I dream of beating Peter over and over again
    I try to leave the island
    I hope to get out of this place
    I am desperate and busted open

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  7. I Am
    I am forgotten
    I wonder if I’m going die
    I hear the birds
    I see the birds eating my flesh on the ground
    I want to get out of this island
    I am forgotten

    I pretend that I am in a warm place
    I feel sad
    I touch my broken arm
    I worry the people are coming again
    I cry “get me out of this island!”
    I am forgotten

    I don’t understand why I am on this island
    I say, “Go away!” to the bear
    I dream about going back home
    I try to move, but I can’t
    I hope I survive
    I am worried

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  8. I Am
    I am desperate and cut open
    I wonder if Edwin and Garvey will come to my aid
    I hear the seagulls eating my flesh, without caring a thing about me
    I see my family enjoying their time without me
    I want to be in jail
    I am forgotten and ripped apart

    I pretend that nothing is wrong
    I feel neglected
    I touch the vomit that I threw-up
    I worry if anyone cares about me anymore
    I cry about if I’m going die, and how I might die
    I am lonely and busted open

    I understand that it was never my fault, for any of my problems
    I say that is was my parents fault
    I dream I’m alright
    I try to hang on the edge and survive
    I hope that people realise what pain they put me through
    I am desperate and cut open

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  9. I am busted open
    I wonder if I'll survive
    I hear my dad yelling at me
    I see memories from my chidhood
    I want to be in a safer place, a warmer place
    I am desperate

    I pretend to be brave
    I feel lonely
    I touch my bloody flesh with my one moving arm
    I worry if it'll come back and hurt me
    I cry in pain
    I am busted open

    I understand how others feel when I hurt them
    I say I'll get everyone back
    I dream to get away, to leave this island
    I try to move
    I hope I'll survive
    I am busted open

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  10. I Am

    I am isolated and forgotten
    I wonder what Garvey would say if he saw me now
    I hear birds ripping out my insides
    I see my broken limbs
    I want to hurt everyone who has hurt me
    I am alone and unloved

    I pretend I am better than the rest
    I feel broken
    I touch my soul
    I worry about my death
    I cry about the path that I've chosen
    I am determined and furious

    I understand that my parents don't care for me
    I say that Peter was wrong
    I dream about being back in jail
    I try to hide my emotions
    I hope that the spirit bear will not return
    I am destroyed and powerless

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  11. I Am

    I am busted open, I'm going to die
    I wonder when it will happen
    I hear blood dripping
    I see broken bones
    I want to feel warmth
    I am dying

    I pretend to be strong
    I feel very weak
    I touch a broken bone in my arm
    I worry for my life
    I cry when I think about my family
    I am busted open, I'm going to die

    I understand what I've done
    I say the spirit bear is weak
    I dream I'm in paradise
    I try to keep going
    I hope to survive this
    I am busted open, I'm going to die

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  12. I Am

    I am Dying,Forgotten
    I wonder If i will survive.
    I hear The seagulls fighting over a piece of my flesh.
    I see My torn open chest.
    I want To be cared for.
    I am Dying,Forgotten

    I pretend I have a family who cares for me.
    I feel My raw flesh.
    I touch My broken ribs.
    I worry That the spirit bear will come back.
    I cry Your dead to the spirit bear.
    I am Dying,Forgotten

    I understand I have been making the wrong choices.
    I say I will kilkl the spirit bear.
    I dream Of the beatings my father gives me.
    I try To act like I'm okay.
    I hope I survive the night.
    I am Dying,Forgotten

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  13. I Am

    I am weak and hungry
    I wonder if I die today
    I hear my blood dripping
    I see my vomit
    I want off this island
    I am weak and hungry

    I pretend kill that bear
    I feel pain horrible pain
    I touch my chest
    I worry I'm going to die
    I cry to the thought of being alone
    I am weak and hungry

    I understand I'm in a bad situation
    I say I blame everybody
    I dream I'm at home
    I try to get up
    I hope to get out of here
    I am weak and hungry

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  14. I Am

    I am forgotten
    I wonder what my parent think of me
    I hear my father slapping me
    I see i am stuck on a island
    I want to live
    I am not remembered

    I pretend to go to this island fix myself
    I feel my bones cracking
    I touch my ribs
    I worry i will not live
    I cry will i live?
    I am lonely

    I understand ive been making bad chocies
    I say im sorry
    I dream about death
    I try to survive
    I hope to survive
    I am lost

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  15. I Am

    I am dying and desperate
    I wonder if i will survive
    I hear yelling voices
    I see blood on the ground
    I want a better life
    I am dying and desperate

    I pretend to have a good life
    I feel broken
    I touch my bloody body
    I worry that the spiit bear will return
    I cry because nobody cares
    I am dying and deperate

    I understand nobody cares
    I say help me
    I dream having a better life
    I try to be strong
    I hope to be saved from this nightmare
    I am dying and desperate

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    1. Sorry I spelt somethings wrong... *spirit *desperate

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  16. I Am

    I am going to die
    I wonder if anyone misses me
    I hear blood dripping off my body
    I see blood every where
    I want to go back and go to jail
    I am dying inside and out

    I pretend people love me
    I feel mad and hurt
    I touch my knife
    I worry if i'm going to die
    I cry i might die
    I am going to die

    I understand that nobody cares about me
    I say kill me now
    I dream of being loved
    I try to be strong
    I hope i'm going to live
    I am dying

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  17. I Am

    I am worried desperate
    I wonder if ill live
    I hear birds chirping
    I see my flesh
    I want to live
    I am worried desperate

    I pretend i have a good life
    I feel mad
    I touch my knife beside my body
    I worry about my life
    I cry inside
    I am worried desperate

    I understand i'm dying
    I say i'm forgotten
    I dream that ill have a happy life
    I try to move my body
    I hope the SB doesn't return
    I am worried desperate

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  18. I am forgotten
    I wonder if my parents care
    I hear my parents laughing at me
    I see dark clouds hovering over me
    I want people to care
    I am never to be rembered
    I pretend to love my family
    I feel like im alone and no one cares
    I touch the fur I had pulled off the sb
    I worry that no one will love me
    I cry inside
    I am someone no one will rember
    I understand that if I die I can never say goodbye
    I say that if I die my parents will be happy
    I dream to be in a happy place
    I try to stay strong
    I hope my parents will care if I die
    I am someone no one will want to look at

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  19. I Am
    I am scared
    I wonder if I'm going to die
    I hear nothing but the wind and rain
    I see the spirit bear once again
    I want the pain to go away
    I am forgoten

    I pretend to act like I want to change
    I feel angry at others
    I touch the wounds on my body
    I worry that I wont make it out alive
    I cry that i might not live to see another day
    I am frightened

    I understand I might not make it off the island
    I say i will make it out alive
    I dream about the past
    I try to swim off the island
    I hope to recover from the wounds
    I am..... i am worried.

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  20. I am angry and bitter
    I wonder what its like to be loved and wanted
    I hear yells and lies
    I see bruises and scars
    I am bitter and angry

    I pretend that I know what I'm doing
    I feel scared and helpless
    touch the bears fur
    I worry if I'll die
    I am alone and worried

    I understand what I did was wrong
    I say I'm sorry
    I dream of a new life
    I hope for a new beginning
    I am honest and new

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